How do you like this poem (its about love)?

Spring Suicide



Couples with glad hands beaming

Sunlight abounding with flowers teaming

Stuck in English winter my soul feels

Windchime the sounds of my wheels



World of sunlit vison for all other

Grey fog bank for those that smother

In lonliness the contrast is deep

For lovers the heart is to keep



Mating season for the winners of life

Extended January full of strife for others

Please warm the cold extensions of this wretch

Looking for skybound hearts of girls to fetch



Ending many reigns of futility in motion

Bullet in the chamber speaks a good notion

Harmless to all others but themselves

No fear of retailation but on oneself



Quiet death separates the cool from the rash

Surrounded by chirping birds and yellow flowers

Making the enticement of the end to be flashed

Destroying all the vileness of the fools that glower



Ropes, bullets, crashes or even carbon gas

Will ensure that those that are sad will not last

Anger from lack of love sends for the self hate

Tired of waiting for the doves the denied cannot wait

How do you like this poem (its about love)?
its really good...i too have written a poem on love..it's obviously not good as urs..bt just an attempt by me...
Reply:It's good.
Reply:kind of morbid.

some would even call it emo.
Reply:simply beautiful!!
Reply:I love it! I especially like the line "Looking for sky bound hearts of girls to fetch". Great Job; have a star!